Haiku

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  • Hey you clever lot

    This is all too much for me

    Fingers and toes busy

    Lot to learn

  • Monitoring food

    Watching through the window pane

    Two Jays land on tray

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    not sure the rules of Haiku except for 5, 7, 5      can you have a line that runs on to the next ?   ie., 

    Spring has arrived with ....

    flourish of unfurling leaves

    in dappled sunlight

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    Regards, Hazel 

  • Love those Hazel. I think the rules are pretty flexible - and in any case, if we're having fun who cares? lol

  • One for the Easter weekend weather ;-)

    Atlantic rollers

    pounding the jagged headland

    Skua aerobatics

    "Let loose the Kraken!"

  • Nice one Stuart

  • Unknown said:
    and in any case, if we're having fun who cares? lol

       think this Haiku is becoming addictive  lol

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    Regards, Hazel 

  • I'm pretty rubbish at this sort of thing. To cover up my poetic inadequacies I've attempted an illustrated version. 

    Forlornly he seeks

    a beauty to share his life.

    Could she be the one?

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    Tony

    My Flickr Photostream 

  • Leaves unfold into the light against harsh thorn you thrive amongst..plain plumaged bird let your song be heard piercing air winter gives to spring..flight be rhythm we speak, song the music we take to heart, colour the emotion we journey with...

  • Don't put yourself down Tony, that's a beautiful example

  • Clever lot we have here, like the picture with yours Tony.

    Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.

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