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To the Brilliance of Birds
The dawn came up like thunder
Sun beams smote like velvet voile
A chorus of calls and noise of motion
Wings beating and flocks soaring
Up and up in the chill of the morn
Greeting the world and one another
Announcing a new day to one and all
Left behind, looking up, I smiled
But a tear dimmed my vision
Just briefly for joy, and a wonder
Of nature settled upon me
Of birds in their beauty of soft
Feathered attire and their bright
Eyes glinting in the sunlight
Thats a jolly nice poem there. Thanks
Andrew
Hi Cirrus
Thankyou for sharing such a wonderful poem with us
Kind regards Kimbo
Feeling More Positive :-)
Thanks Cirrus - sentiments I believe we all share, beautifully expressed:-)
Kezsmum
Golly, I thought my poem would remain unnoticed !!
Thank you Kimbo, Andrewa, and Kezsmum and H
Very nice,
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-- Only just found it, Cirrus! Well done. Its how we feel when we are enjoying the sight of our favourite birds.
Unknown said: Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 To the Brilliance of Birds The dawn came up like thunder Sun beams smote like velvet voile A chorus of calls and noise of motion Wings beating and flocks soaring Up and up in the chill of the morn Greeting the world and one another Announcing a new day to one and all Left behind, looking up, I smiled But a tear dimmed my vision Just briefly for joy, and a wonder Of nature settled upon me Of birds in their beauty of soft Feathered attire and their bright Eyes glinting in the sunlight
I love the peaceful words and images given through poetry.
Thanks Cirrus for sharing such a beautiful poem.
I wonder in reply may I share one with you.
A Birds Story
Side by side as good and evil collide
She is the owl of sunlight
He is a rogue displaying black plumage
Spreading their wings of timeless wisdom
Opaque eyes his chirp a sinister omen
Feared for centuries this messenger
of doom. Perched upon myths
of legend, he tries to rid himself of this dismal
moniker. Jealous of the doves’ attention he flies
though eerie skies of crimson dawn, searching
abandoned souls for recognition.
Gliding, soaring and believing
The simple blessings every
Living and breathing being
Shares
Her presence is to remind
Ignite fires of innocence
All inherited but lost in pain
She satisfies a hunger far beyond
The mental and physical desires
She provides a spiritual thirst to feed our divine will
From a well that cannot measure or run low
A determined will that knows
No spectrum of darkness or burning light
Caw, caw; his rallying cry pierces the night
I am so much more, for I to have a luminous side
I feel as the dove feels peaceful meandering yet
Still reviled. Let her and I fly simultaneously amongst
The living and the dead.
A transparent and recognizable glare
By just one glance through the windows
Of each soul
The window that gazes and searches
For bliss
An eternal connection to the brilliance
Sparking purpose from the miracle
Of five senses aligning and capturing life
No longer scattered
The message is carried even through moonlight
Their wings bless every sky
Crow and Dove
Justice reigns and call
Glory
Without an end
That's a lot of food for thought , Mitch - thanks for that. I like the part about "The simple blessings every living & breathing being shares", and the "perched upon myths of legend". I always think its a shame that most b. of prey are much maligned and have a sinister label, as if its their fault that they have evolved in that way.
That is food for thought Mitch ! I need to meditate on that and keep having a re-read. You obvioiulsy felt passionate about your subject It's very thought provoking. Thank you.