I have written a few poems over the years, some about birds, here are some.
The Kingfisher I stood there leaning against the wall And watched you fish by the waters fall A brilliant, vibrant electric blue Showed where you were diving to A slight splash Then the flash Of blue wings beating Then upon the branch, the fish you were eating. Val
Dipper Spring I sat on the bench by the river My binoculars on my knee I didn't actually need them, She was so close to me Busily flying with moss in her bill To the place she'd decided to nest While her lazy mate stood on a rock But she didn't take any rest. The place she had chosen was high in the bank Beside the waterfall Her mate was leaving her to it But occasionally he would call She didn't answer him And her expression said it all. I could have stayed all day Though I had to leave them be Housewifely duties called And I had to go home and get tea. I visited the bench again Later in that same Spring On the bank of the river Where the Dippers sing On a dead tree branch under the nest Four baby Dippers in a row Parents were feeding them all in turn They looked about ready to go. Amazed that I'd seen them Such a lucky girl was me Something I've never forgotten Which happened so unexpectedly. Val
The Gathering At a distance black snowflakes swirling in the air Then closer still changing like smoke clouds Thousands of starlings wheeling everywhere Gathering together to roost in their crowds Then down they go in a waterfall Cascading into the reeds All answering the call Like a broken string of beads Val.
Best wishes
Val.
Bravo Val excellent, painting with words
Mike
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Nice one val, thanks thats lovely Alan
i say always look on the bright side of life, as you cannot see anything on the other ?
You have a lovely writing style. Well done and thanks for sharing
Sarah
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Oh yes exellent.
I've never really liked poems(the OLDE ENGLISH poems at school didn't help!) but I love those. I can just imagine those lovely birds! I'm glad I don't have to write an essay analysing the techniques and 'how the poet made the poem blah blah blah....' : )
'Dip a dee dah, dip a dee ay, we're not seeing any birds to-day...'
Fantastic Val was sat there with you with the kingfisher
Ray
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Gosh! You Guys, blushing here. Thank you all so very much for your very kind comments on my poems. Much appreciated, thank you all again.
They're lovely, Val - thanks for sharing. I particularly like 'The Gathering' one.
Only a beautiful mind can produce such poetry,
superduper Val.
Hi Val
A beautiful picture painted with words.
Robert