Haiku

  • In reply to Stuart Vine:

    Here's one I wrote ages ago but seems maybe appropriate for this time of year - hope you like it...

    Feather scythe slicing

    Through the summer air, screaming

    His joy in Swift song!

    Not sure about the word 'screaming' but couldn't think of a better one that would fit.

    Dotty

  • In reply to dotty:

    Love it Dotty, and I think screaming is just the right word!

  • In reply to see gull:

    Thanks see gull.

    Dotty

  • In reply to Bobs_Still_Retired:

    its been quite a while

    but good things dont go away

    so lets have some more

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    spring is in the air

    hearing birdsong everywhere

    now lets see the sun

  • In reply to see gull:

    Uke needs an airing

    nature calls it's tempting tune

    which one would you choose?

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    No competition,

    Teach Titch to warble outside

    while I strum indoors!!!!

    Lot to learn

  • In reply to gaynorsl:

    Weather has warmed up

    Is spring around the corner?

    Birds are now nesting

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    Lungs need an airing

    Leighton Moss is beckoning

    Robins want waxworms  !

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    Regards, Hazel 

    "Each kindness shown to birds or men is sure to flutter back again" 

  • In reply to HAZY:

    Noisy Rookery

    Delightful Robin hand-feeds

    For MC and me

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    WOW Slow worms a first

    Kestrel flies high to a tree

    For MC and me

     

     2013 photos & vids here

    eff37 on Flickr

  • In reply to WendyBartter:

    got my timing wrong

    should have waited for today

    its World Haiku Day!

  • In reply to see gull:

    You're a good Boy Scout

    Baden-Powell would be proud

    Ahead of the game

     

     2013 photos & vids here

    eff37 on Flickr

  • Thought it about time we had another go at Haiku ................

    Left out in the cold

    I'm waiting on the platform

    For updates forthcoming

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    The big question is.....

    Will it be on the right rails ?

    or parked in sidings !

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    Regards, Hazel 

    "Each kindness shown to birds or men is sure to flutter back again"